Recommended Comments 〈DELUXE〉

Focus on reinforcing what they did well while giving clear directions for improvement. "This is a very well-thought-out argument!" "You express your ideas so well in this section." "I love how you’ve used vivid language choices here." Constructive Critique:

"Moving forward, think about how this point connects back to your main argument." Recommended Comments

"The difficulty with this section is that it does not develop a clearly expressed thesis." Focus on reinforcing what they did well while

Structure your feedback into major and minor comments to help the author prioritize revisions. Recommended Comments

"There is a bit too much plot summary here; try to focus more on your own analysis."